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New edit. Critique

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jibcrew1
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Dec 25 2012 5:00PM
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HWW
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Nice work!

What I noticed:

• footage was mostly a bit shaky
• shots weren't always easy to follow
• background music - was that playing at the hill?

• b/w did work well
• editing was nice
• auditorium? liked it
• ski sounds were nice
Dec 25 2012 5:05PM
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jibcrew1
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thanks i ended up having to go with b/w because the colors didnt really work in natural light and it was on a poorly weight diy glidecam but i have a good tripod now 701 head and stuff, and yes the mtn plays music in one of the parks hard to work with the audio when its like that but thanks for the feedback.
Dec 25 2012 5:22PM
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jibcrew1
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since it is my own thread anyone know what manfrotto quick release plate for a glidecam xr-2000 so i can go from my tripod to the glidecam quickly
Dec 26 2012 12:01PM
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jibcrew1
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Dec 27 2012 9:44PM
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jibcrew1
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Dec 29 2012 9:35PM
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Splice.
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Just some things I noticed:

-Overall, really good.

I personally didn't like the B&W Effect, it enhanced some shots, but others, it just made them hard to understand.

Also, music.

That's just me though.
Dec 29 2012 10:44PM
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FatWhore
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Looks like your frames per second were loww
Dec 29 2012 10:46PM
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jibcrew1
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Jan 4 2013 1:18AM
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.qzyxya
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Overall I thought it was pretty good, I think the B&W did work out pretty well. Music was interesting.
There was some weird looking ghosting, if you pause the video, you can see that on every other frame (maybe every) it merges two frames together to create one frame and you can see the skier in two different positions, with one of them ghosted out and semi transparent.
Nice skiing
Jan 4 2013 1:55PM
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MaxBerkowitz
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-sick skiing
-liked the b/w worked well
-imo the font was just silly
-background noise (different than ski sound!) made it weird... not in a good way
-i'm guessing when rendering you clicked "frame blending" in your editing software, which caused some ugly ghosting issues, remember to unclick this option next time.
Jan 4 2013 2:01PM
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jibcrew1
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this saved my next edit thanks for the tip went to look back through rendering i had set up for vimeo and fixed it
Jan 4 2013 4:43PM
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