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Mitchell.
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Dec 16 2012 6:00PM
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Mitchell.
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**the youtube link at the bottom is my signature, not the video; click the text or [LINK]**
Dec 16 2012 6:06PM
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gravel
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it's time for you to put down the camera and shut off your computer.
Dec 16 2012 6:13PM
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will_powder
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The flashing black frames were annoying as hell. Like I almost have a headache from that crap. Also, 500000000000 lens flares, simmer down on those.

The dude rapping looks boring as hell, get him to throw his hands around or something.
Dec 16 2012 6:25PM
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Mitchell.
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anyone else
Dec 16 2012 11:04PM
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gravel
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sorry, i was responding to the link in your sig, not the actual video that you wanted a critique.... i'll watch it and tell you what i think.

i didn't like the parkour one because of the dubstep and general non entertaining part of it.
Dec 16 2012 11:55PM
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Mitchell.
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harsh but okay haha
Dec 17 2012 12:13AM
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Mitchell.
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bump
Dec 20 2012 1:06PM
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deleted2
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Don't let anyone with epilepsy watch that....
Dec 20 2012 5:16PM
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Randy_Marsh
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hmm. rap was decent, video was not all that entertaining. rapper looks bored and I didn't really understand all of the title cards flashing. Maybe try to tell more of a story with the video even if it just involves walking around town. movement is good. Oh and cool it with the flares.
Dec 20 2012 6:20PM
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