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direwolf
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I got a t2i last year and this was one of the first edits i made. I am new to the video making scene and would like to improve. Let me know what i should do or not do.I had a broken wrist while filming this so follow cams were tricky and didnt really use any. I would love all the advice or criticism i can get to improve in the future. Thanks.


Nov 18 2012 6:59PM
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erettpeace
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just more shots from the front would make it balanced. theres alot from the back. otherwise its dope
Nov 18 2012 8:02PM
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direwolf
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yeah i noticed that. thanks for your input
Nov 18 2012 8:21PM
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SNP_CREW
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At first I was feeling like the 1 clip for the 1 trick was kinda repetitive but towards the end I felt you added alot more angles per trick which is nice viewing wise. Also what resolution was that? when I tried fullscreen it just didnt look that great. But I liked it with the song alot too good work
Nov 18 2012 8:26PM
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direwolf
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its 1280 x 720 at 60p. quality isnt as good as other peoples with a t2i and i dont know why. Thanks for the feedback
Nov 18 2012 8:41PM
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cwillygood
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really liked that! super good song, what was it btw? loved the different angles on some of the shots. the lighting and focus seemed good! the only thing i would have done different is put a few more lifestyle shots in the middle and maybe a few less film burns
Nov 18 2012 8:47PM
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direwolf
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Song: Money Grabber - Fitz and the Tantrums

Thanks for the advice!
Nov 18 2012 8:53PM
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DeRizzo
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dope edit man. I always love it when people throw in multiple angles for 1 shot like at 1:05. More of that and rail shots from the front and your good
Nov 19 2012 12:12AM
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direwolf
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Glad you liked it. Thanks for the advice!

Nov 19 2012 5:43PM
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gusestomp
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Thought that was really sick! But the only thing is that you used the film burn transition a bit too much imo. Bother than that it was super sick
Nov 19 2012 10:18PM
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direwolf
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stoked you like it. Thanks for your opinion!
Nov 19 2012 11:14PM
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ALMIGHTYSOSA
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It was actually pretty good. Keep it up
Nov 20 2012 1:44AM
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direwolf
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Thanks!
Nov 20 2012 10:23AM
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direwolf
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bump
Nov 21 2012 11:52PM
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penguiin
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that was pretty good for a first edit man, but like others said, less film burn and longer shots that or more than one trick and it will be even better, keep it up
Nov 22 2012 3:16AM
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direwolf
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alright thanks dog

Nov 24 2012 5:22PM
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[J_Gasper]
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super sick for your first edit.

Only got a few things to say. Some of the shots could have been a little tighter. It felt like you were shooting wide a majority of the time. Also, some shots were a tad over exposed. If you dont have an ND filter, get one. They are a life saver on hill. Lastly, you may want to invest in a glidecam or nice tripod if you are serious into filming. Shots look so much better with decent stabilization.



Nov 24 2012 5:40PM
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direwolf
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Just invested in a new tripod so i can get tighter and more stabilized jump shots. saving up for a glidecam as we speak. and i will look into an ND filter.

Glad you thought it was sick.
Nov 24 2012 9:35PM
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pjbackwoods
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Awesome edit. Stabilization is my only issue in this edit but youve got that covered already. Keep working at it !
Nov 24 2012 10:51PM
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direwolf
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thanks dog

Nov 25 2012 8:55AM
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