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Ceaseless Tides. A Visual Poem

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AntiBang
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Hey everyone.

I'm a freshman film student at the University of Denver and I've just finished my first college-level project. I'd love it if you'd take the time to watch it leave me some feedback. It is, what I call, a "visual poem".

Here's the link. I'm total newbsauce so if someone could embed it for me I'd appreciate it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kgQFxrl3OVA&feature=plcp

Thank you
Nov 17 2012 2:43PM
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AntiBang
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kgQFxrl3OVA&feature=plcp


Nov 17 2012 2:45PM
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AntiBang
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Nov 17 2012 2:49PM
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juicedrummer11
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that was pretty sweet man. in my class someone did a visual poem also but there's wasn't nearly as detailed. very nice. i thought you did well with the sound too
Nov 18 2012 1:56PM
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Caspaaa
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really interesting....


you're talented in two art forms, both poetry and cinematography. putting the two together like this is new to me but i liked the way you made it work.
Nov 18 2012 9:23PM
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TomTeller
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Really nice man, a few things I would change:

Maybe add some bass to the audio, duplicate your vocal track and drop the pitch.
If you had faded the lights in and out in the shots of your face it would have flowed better between the cuts.

Nice work though!
Nov 18 2012 9:52PM
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AntiBang
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Some great ideas, thanks a bunch.

Thank you everyone for you compliments as well.
Nov 19 2012 3:12PM
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