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Preseason Edit

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Jiberfish
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First edit this year from a early snow in october. Shredded my friends backyard and filmed with a T1i. (first time shooting with a dslr) I edited it and we both filmed. Please give me some helpful pointers! I know i probably used a little too much depth of field... And during the day the snow was sticky as shit so it made it pretty challenging... Anyways enjoy!

And give me feedback on it and dont be a dick about it.

http://vimeo.com/52631373
http://vimeo.com/52631373


Nov 7 2012 10:02PM
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Jiberfish
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Clicky: http://vimeo.com/52631373
+K for embed!
Nov 7 2012 10:03PM
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Preseason Skiing: Backyard Rail Edit (Fr0z3n Sun Productions) from Fr0z3n Sun Productions on Vimeo.


Nov 7 2012 10:09PM
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Jiberfish
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Thank you sir! 10/10
Nov 7 2012 10:12PM
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snakerton
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that was so dope! i really enjoyed that
Nov 7 2012 10:43PM
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Jiberfish
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Thanks dude! +K
Nov 7 2012 11:45PM
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Sklar
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pretty good man!
i like the song
to improve:
stability and smoothness of movements, zooms, and focus pulls
I liked it, but it would have been better at about 2 minutes, 2:30 maybe
I stopped watching at the part with a bunch of rack focus shots in a row
your framing could use some work at some points

i feel like there was another point that i had, i'll post if i remember it
Nov 8 2012 12:01AM
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Jiberfish
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Aright thanks for the tips! I realized it was too long. i definitely should have cut it.

+K for some constructive criticism. that really did help out some
Nov 8 2012 12:11AM
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