Replying to Slenderman -- short film

I entered a student horror film festival and actually managed to win the high school division. We had to pick a theme from a bag (I got video game) and create a film around that theme in 96 hours. We also were required to use two lines given to us. Here's my film. Tell me what you think.

Slenderman -- A Short Film by Evan Wait from Evan Wait on Vimeo.