that was okay, nothing really stood out as superb in my opinion
some of the timelapses needed to be longer shutter, more blur to capture the motion, or just the lapse needed to be faster with more people (timing ie college campus after class gets out)
song was alright, had its ups and downs, sort of inconsistent beat drops with the normal video then timelapse video
composition was sub par, like you just threw a fisheye on there
colours could have been better, last shot i liked but was too over exposed in the sky, did you shoot RAW? that could've helped right?
i am no expert so take what i am giving you with a large grain of salt, but this is just my 2 cents
also for what its worth the camera position in the car really bothered me