It was pretty good but there was definitively some things that you could have improved.
Some things:
- Allot of the shots were a bit overexposed, use an ND filter.
- Get a better fluid video head, this would improve your work allot!
- Try not to use so many fade to black, these often stops the flow of the edit and you didn't need those film burns.
- Your songs were kind of over used, try to find something new.
- In your first interview you faded down the music to early, you cold also have tried to have the music playing really low in the background so that the flow doesn't stop.
- You could have used only one song.
- Edit more to the music, and some clips was a little to long. For example the clip at 02.58 was to long and should have been cut at the beat when stop come.
- At least one of the interviews had problems with wind noise, get a dead cat.
- The colors were a bit flat, try to do some color correction.
- And the last ting it was a bit long, cut it down and make sure all the cuts are fast and fits the music.
But as said it was pretty good and I liked the editing at 03.30, I really hope you don't take this to be harsh because they are all pretty small things that could have improved your video allot.
