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My Woodward week 11 rough edit - tell me what you think

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chill_davis
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just was wondering if I could get some feedback. week 11 woodward PA

w/ Chaz Ortiz, PLG, and Mitchie Brusco

Woodward Week 11 from Will Davis on Vimeo.

Sep 11 2012 10:43PM
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chill_davis
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oh and Alex Midler
Sep 11 2012 10:49PM
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TOMMYTANK
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I saw this on YouTube or somewhere else, I forgot.
Sep 11 2012 10:58PM
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802Valley
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its pretty sick. some constructive criticism- i like the beat in the beginning  but it be sick if you had a faster tempo only cuz its a short piece, and perhaps a little more variety of angle shots when shooting the set pieces of the skaters , other than that its a sick video. keep up the good work man
Sep 11 2012 11:07PM
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chill_davis
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Thanks dude. I originally had the beginning song throughout the whole video, but I changed it last minute
Sep 12 2012 7:52AM
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E__
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It was dope, I liked it but what he said up there covered everything I had to say.
Sep 12 2012 8:01AM
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chill_davis
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word thanks dude
Sep 12 2012 8:52AM
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skiP.E.I.
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I thought your editing was really good! If it was you filming, I think you could try to set up the shot to better represent the action, and make it more aesthetically pleasing ... The shot at 1:17 is an example where imo you could be in a better position, but I realize it was indoors and places where you could stand are probably limited. Also there was a bit of motion blur in a lot of shots which detracted from the edit. I thought the filming was good, but could have been better. Overall I thought you did a great job, but you could consider your shots more carefully to make it even better.
Sep 12 2012 11:33AM
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J_MAC
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its all around pretty dope
Sep 12 2012 11:55AM
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Ali.
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Pretty sweet man! Liked the song choice. Enjoyed it.
Sep 12 2012 12:07PM
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chill_davis
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Yeah some of the shots I didn't have a choice because the actual professional fillmers claimed there spots but thanks much dude
Sep 12 2012 1:21PM
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chill_davis
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I totally get what you're saying though
Sep 12 2012 1:54PM
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Dragonite.
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Really good Will! Really enjoyed it. Makes me miss Nigward.
Sep 12 2012 3:16PM
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chill_davis
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I started like a couple months ago, and I had a song that worked so well with it but I couldn't fit the clips with the song and it needed to be done for premiere at woodward so I just plopped that instrumental in there. Yes the areas were off limits, but there was 33 kids in the film program so getting the shot you wanted was tough, not to mention when filming pros, their filmers get dibs.
Sep 12 2012 5:18PM
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