Replying to New Video. Critiques Welcome!!

Hey guys. So a few days before the contest deadline I decided I would throw something together for the pilot project and see how it did.
I know its already up on the site but I figured I would post it up because I always like a bit of feedback! Anyways, let me know what you think , give it a vote if you want, and if you have not yet, check out all the contest submissions and vote for whichever ones you like, there are some real good ones!

Thanks

Trimmings: Of A Montana Beginning from Bobby Jahrig on Vimeo.