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Do you guys like this logo featured in the video? For a friends clothing company.
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I think i would like it more if the eye was gone but that might mess up what you were going for. Other than that it looks good.
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is lumen meant to be a play on Illuminati? just cos it seems like the logo is a near copy of the Illuminati symbol just with some other shit going on, maybe that is what you're going for though..
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We really liked the design of the all seeing eye but we don't want that to automatically link people to the "illumanati"
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i feel like the lines of the eye may be too thick. it just seems like a small eye that was made too bold. maybe thin down the lines a little, and the pupil.
just my 2 cents.
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well, you guys copied that idea so obviously people are going to think about it...
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It looks ok, but needs some work. Make the fronds 10 percent smaller and nudge them away from the pyramid a little.
Make the tip of the pyramid larger, and make the neg space separating them a little wider.
Pull LUMEN away from the bottom of the pyramid, it's too close.
Then make that eye a little larger to compensate for the slightly larger tip, and make the strokes a little thicker.
See how that works for you, post an image of the old with the new side by side.
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liked the logo. LOVED the song
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