Replying to Much Needed Critique

Have a bigger project due in a few days and I need a fresh pair of eyes on it. Would love any critiques you might have, don't hold back. Was hired to shoot this video to provide more of non-technical side for a company called COAST based out of Oregon. The plan was to showcase a camping trip with some clips of COAST products being used.

*It is not entirely finished, still missing about 6 shots for a conclusion and a few transition shots in the beginning. Unfortunately budget is limited and I cant license any song, little limited on choices...

Thanks!

Weekends on The Coast Episode 1 from Travels Through Images on Vimeo.