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Moon Lake Critique

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Merrill
Posts: 253 - Karma: 71

I already posted this in the summer edit thread but i would really like to get a critique on it because it is my favorite video i have made yet.

I would love to hear what you guys think i could improve on and i will also give karma for critiques. Thanks!

Aug 17 2012 1:11PM
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Merrill
Posts: 253 - Karma: 71

Bump

Aug 19 2012 7:15PM
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MothaHucker
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I cant give much of a critique but I though the edit was pretty dope. definately gives off that kind of camping family fun vibe.
Aug 20 2012 3:50AM
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gusestomp
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The only thing I would have to say, the colors were very bland to me. Try color grading it, it would make it so much more interesting, give it some of your style!
Aug 21 2012 7:34AM
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Merrill
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Thanks for the feedback. I have the hardest time with color because I always over do it. I thought that the color was alright at the beginning of this edit but then i felt like i was overdoing it so i toned it down. Did you think that the first few shots were to bland or was it just the shots later on in the edit?
Aug 22 2012 11:50PM
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YoungChristmas
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I liked the way the colors looked in the beginning better than the end. Great job though, I thought that that was really well made.
Aug 23 2012 12:28AM
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Boooshank
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Quality editing. Loved the vibe. Will concur with others about the colour tone a little. Regardless an enjoyable watch.

If I had one critque, all be it a small one. It would be to have seen more laughter or smiles ya know? Laughter round the camp fire would of been perfect.
Aug 23 2012 7:23AM
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Merrill
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Thanks a lot for the feedback guys. It helps a ton!
Aug 28 2012 12:17PM
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