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Critique my fishing edit.

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snowisawesome
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Ok so last Sunday I decided to bring the camera out on the water and film my brother as he fished a local creek in the afternoon.  I think it turned out fairly well but I know it could be better.  Any kind of feedback would be appreciated.  Unfortunately I didn't get my white balance set correctly before I started shooting, durrr, so the colors are a touch off in a few shots.

Creekside from Montana Wild on Vimeo.




Jul 13 2012 3:32PM
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sweatshirt
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wow that was really well done.. the shots flowed really well and you made it easy to watch, like the first post said
Jul 14 2012 5:50AM
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snowisawesome
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Thanks guys
Jul 14 2012 10:55AM
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twsnow22
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that was really sick.. take shots were really legit too.
Jul 14 2012 11:16AM
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broto
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i agree with what everyone said above me. it was easy on the eyes, well cut, filmed, etc. however i feel like the music was very repetitive and even though it was easy on the eyes it was not the same on the ears. i wanted to turn it off after a while. maybe try something with words or two songs instead of one. that's all i've got to say.
Jul 14 2012 5:06PM
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ChaseW
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that was awesome. the picture was good. I live in montana where were you guys at?
Jul 15 2012 9:53PM
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hardig1234
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awesome makes me want to go out tmorrow morning
Jul 16 2012 12:41AM
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SkiJay.
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That was good! At first I didn't know how you could make a 5 minute video on fishing entertaining but i ended up watching the whole thing. Kept my interest!
Jul 16 2012 3:23AM
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C.Wood
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Really well done, very enjoyable to watch, only thing i noticed was that the sky was blown out in alot of shots when the guy was actually fishing. But in the car ride they weren't.
Jul 16 2012 1:58PM
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snowisawesome
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Ya when it's sunny it can be a bit tough to get the right dynamic range with my camera.  Your right though a few might have been a bit over exposed.
Jul 17 2012 12:19PM
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powninja
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Ya buddy. Turned out sick!
Jul 17 2012 12:45PM
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maximiliaan
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altough i hate fishing, i watched the whole clip.. pretty good edit
Jul 17 2012 1:20PM
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