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VB-Films
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Hi guys,

So I just made my first skate edit and I'd love some feedback on what I did good/could do better in the future.

I would like it if you focused more on the filming/editing part and the overall atmosphere of the edit and not so much on the fact that it isn't just mad bangers after each other.

Hope you guys like it!

Oh, and sorry for not putting it in the video section but I probably won't get any response there so I figured I'd put it here instead! +k for feedback



Jul 11 2012 10:32AM
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cornholio
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zoinks
Jul 11 2012 10:33AM
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2L208
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need to go bigger
Jul 11 2012 10:39AM
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JzD.
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Pretty sweet for your first edit. Personally I like to have more still frame video, like at 3:17. A lot of your shots move with the skater, which is good, but seeing the features before the skater hits them can add to it
Jul 11 2012 11:08AM
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VB-Films
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Thanks man, definetly gonna have that in mind for the next time I film! +K
Jul 11 2012 11:12AM
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gusestomp
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I definitely liked the edit. It was absolutely sick. But I felt that some of the shots ended a little bit too quickly. I did however loved the music with it. I just seemed to fit in with the edit perfectly. And the color grading was a good touch. Just try and add some slow motion to some of the clips.

Example - 0.32

I don't really know if this helps you, but this is just of what I thought, that could've make the edit just a little bit sicker.

- Guse
Jul 13 2012 1:38PM
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VB-Films
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Thanks a lot man! I thought about putting slowmotion on some of the other clips, but I had so many clips that I wanted to use and in order to be able to use them all I had to cut back on the slowmo on some of the clips. +K for you as well my kind sir!
Jul 14 2012 12:32PM
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