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Critique my new track

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alvy.
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If that doesn't work here's the link. Thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/alvarian/nil-name
Jul 10 2012 9:38PM
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Amadeus.
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Hey man good stuff. Two things.

I think the big drop should come a little sooner, like when the first swooshy build up happens and then you should have a middle section like a bridge bit where it mellows down then back to your drop. Also Im not sure if this is the style you are going for but the track sounded a little thin. I would add some pads and almost room tony type stuff in the background to give it a smooth and fatter feel.
Jul 19 2012 11:00PM
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