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Looks like a great start, but you should definitely go in and add multiple line-weights to make it pop. Thicken up some of the lines making up the skiers, and they'll stand out more from the mountains in the background. The uniform line-weight right now makes it a little jumbled and confusing. Good stuff though.
Oh, and I think you should selectively color it. Select parts of the jackets/mountains/logo/etc. It'd look sick done with Prismacolor markers if you have 'em.