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Critique! +K

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*SNO*
Posts: 2575 - Karma: 925
Hey guys! this is my first time coming to Media&Arts asking for a critique but I really want to improve my editing skills.
So I was hoping that you guys could tell me what is good about this and what needs to be improved.




Thanks in advance guys!
May 19 2012 4:05PM
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MACAQUE
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That wasn't bad. But I noticed some things that I wasn't a fan of. I didn't really like the intro with the B&W vid in the background. I would have made that part full color and normal contrast/opacity. There were some shots in the edit that were out of focus, so just be aware of that when you're filming and editing. Don't include those shots. I also found it a little repetitive-try changing up angles a little and find good ones instead of generic ones. All in all, it looked fine for the terrain you had to work with. Keep at it!
May 19 2012 5:36PM
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west-coast
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The intro was dope, but I did not like how most of the shots were out of focus, and cut off the skier at the end of his jib. Work on getting the rider in the full frame, not having the tip of his skis touch out.
May 25 2012 12:55AM
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