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EC-Skier
Posts: 3899 - Karma: 668
Hey guys,
I had people critique my rough cut of this edit. I tried to fix things as much as i could. What do you guys think? Advice on filming and editing are both appreciated!
+k for help

https://www.newschoolers.com/membervideo/467128.0/PriME-Productions:-Cut-Short?s=125410&t=2&o=8
May 4 2012 10:29AM
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CheddarJack
Posts: 5203 - Karma: 7,380
I have nothing to say, but I'm no expert, except that I'd watch edits like that all day
May 4 2012 11:38AM
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EC-Skier
Posts: 3899 - Karma: 668
thanks man
May 4 2012 11:44AM
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D_Smith
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I don't have any advice but that was a dope edit.
May 4 2012 9:30PM
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Legion
Posts: 1374 - Karma: 29
I'd do something different with your sponsor/company logos in the beginning. It seemed a bit jumbled and unprofessional
May 4 2012 9:33PM
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EC-Skier
Posts: 3899 - Karma: 668
yea, i was thinking that also. thanks
+k to both
May 4 2012 10:12PM
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cwillygood
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it was sick, id make sure your exposure is balanced correctly, some shots seemed a little over exposed, unless thats what you were looking for and the skiing didnt really go with the song in the beginning, maybe but some more intro shots the the skiing starts when the music gets going, thats what i like to do with my edits, but its really all opinion,

the edit was sick, i loved the song and the skiing was sick too
May 4 2012 11:04PM
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EC-Skier
Posts: 3899 - Karma: 668
thanks man. +k
May 4 2012 11:11PM
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Mr.Mitten
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your edit was mad dope!!! Such good skiing
May 29 2012 6:54PM
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JWeinstock
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VERY good edit. probaly could have been video of the day if it were a little longer. i only can think of two negatives about this. personally, i think you could have had more views of the big jump. it got a little boring watching the same view over and over. also, the thing at the beginning with all the sponsors seemed really rushed and didn't really make sense. overall, good edit.
May 29 2012 8:43PM
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wellthisisold
Posts: 840 - Karma: 973
sick edit!
May 30 2012 8:42PM
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Casper.
Posts: 622 - Karma: 65
Definetly a sick edit!
May 31 2012 8:08AM
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