Replying to A poem I wrote about my favorite band

For Creative Writing.

"Paradise"
The crowd bubbles with anticipation of the show
outside theres chants and raining faygo
painted faces everywhere that you look
hearing one song is all that it took
to send this mass into a frenzy
of loud "whoop whoops" and family
chanting and swaying and singing along
if you dont know the words, then youre just wrong
you try to catch a bottle of the magical drink
because youre so hot you cant even think
from bodies tightly being pressed together
pushing intensively to get closer and wetter
at the end youre covered with glitter, confetti, and faygo
on the way out you hug all and cant wait for the next show