Member of the Month

KilaTsunami
October, 2024

Online

Welcome to the Newschoolers forums! You may read the forums as a guest, however you must be a registered member to post. Register to become a member today!

A Little Taste of Summer. Fishing, tramping, and slacklining critique.

profile picture
TaranItUp
Posts: 1313 - Karma: 802
Hey guys just finished up a new edit from some spring break shenanigans. Would love to get a critique on this one. The one thing I couldn't really mess with was the colors because the monitor I am editing on at the moment is kinda messed up.

Just a few thing my friends and I did this spring break.

Camera- Canon T2i
Lens- 28-80mm f 3.5-5.6
Edited- Sony Vegas Pro 11
Thanks for watching!

Apr 16 2012 9:15PM
0 0
profile picture
TaranItUp
Posts: 1313 - Karma: 802
bump
Apr 17 2012 10:12PM
0 0
profile picture
FatWhore
Posts: 2213 - Karma: 1,098
liked the roping part, haha pretty good man!
Apr 17 2012 10:14PM
0 0
profile picture
TaranItUp
Posts: 1313 - Karma: 802
Thanks man! any critiques?
Apr 17 2012 10:18PM
0 0
profile picture
FatWhore
Posts: 2213 - Karma: 1,098
Well 0:23 would have been an amazing shot without the sun flare effect.
Apr 17 2012 10:42PM
0 0
profile picture
FatWhore
Posts: 2213 - Karma: 1,098
Also how many FPS were you running?

and haha just released you were using a card board box to flip the hamburgers
Apr 17 2012 10:43PM
0 0
profile picture
TaranItUp
Posts: 1313 - Karma: 802
720p 60fps and yeah we forgot to bring a spatuala and that was our next best bet.
Apr 17 2012 10:57PM
0 0
profile picture
TaranItUp
Posts: 1313 - Karma: 802
.
Apr 18 2012 9:05PM
0 0
profile picture
SkierPT
Posts: 2177 - Karma: 4,720
Good vibe with the edit I enjoyed it. I'd say for the fishing getsome type of stabilizer. The film burns were unneeded too. I love the shot at 2:31 good stuff.
Apr 19 2012 10:37AM
0 0
profile picture
TaranItUp
Posts: 1313 - Karma: 802
Thanks man, yeah those few shaky shots i had a 80-300 lens on my camera and was taking some photos. Then we caught that crawdad and I was rushed to put my camera back on my tripod.
Apr 19 2012 11:26PM
0 0
profile picture
Merrill
Posts: 253 - Karma: 71
Looks like you guys were having a lot of fun. The biggest thing for me was that the colors made it look like it was freezing cold and dreary outside. I think this hurt the vibe you were going for.
Apr 19 2012 11:34PM
0 0
profile picture
TaranItUp
Posts: 1313 - Karma: 802
On what part? Because on the trampoline part it was snowing for half the day and was freezing.
Apr 20 2012 1:09AM
0 0
profile picture
Merrill
Posts: 253 - Karma: 71
The fishing and the tramping, the slacklining was better. Just adding a little bit of an orange or reddish tint to it would make it much better.
Apr 21 2012 1:36AM
0 0
profile picture
wellthisisold
Posts: 840 - Karma: 973
nice edit!
Apr 21 2012 11:48AM
0 0
profile picture
.skiperisher.
Posts: 323 - Karma: 83
i liked it. made me feel better about the warm weather coming up
Apr 25 2012 10:51PM
0 0
All times are Eastern (-5)