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Nick are you really color blind? How do your edits turn out so good haha?



Don't know anything about colors and stuff but the shot at 31 seconds seems a bit over exposed to me. Might just be my lack of knowledge. Can anyone else confirm?

yeaaaa, im actually colorblind haha. makes working with colors a bitch haha

:23 and :46 are pretty blue... other than that, good!

thanks. anyone else?

All around it looks pretty good and enjoyable. Didn't find color annoying at all except for a couple spots as said earlier. Good job!

maybe 32 reds?

that was insanely sick id say a majority of the shots left the snow blown-out

thanks everyone. +k to all
anyone else?

some of the clips were brighter/ more red and some were darker/ more blue. But i actually loved how it went from light to dark to light to dark etc haha. It's refreshing. Sick edit btw

oh yeah and what camera do you use?

I just watched it and noticed a couple things...

1. Some of the cuts could use a little work. Most were on beat, but a couple (look at 0:55) missed. As for the other cuts, some of them were a bit awkward. There are some shots that take too long to end. One example would be 1: 13. there is an awkward moment after the rider fall behind the knuckle. I'd rather watch more of them riding into the feature instead. Also look at 1:03, there was too much ride away for my taste.

2. Have you done any color correction yet? The whites were way out of line in a lot of those shots. Open up a videoscope and crank away to get your levels adjusted and your whites/blacks constant.

3. If you need to put that many logos into a video, don't do it all at once. If you want to do that though, let them sit for longer with a more stagnant background. That shot was just confusing.

4. Put in the names of the riders.

5. Are you going to do any more with sound? A lot of those shots did not involve much camera movement which means you should be able to get some decent sound out of them. If you add sound, it will draw viewers in so much more.

Good work though, I'm excited to start filming at Sunday River next season!

thanks man. +k to everyone.
i will try to work on colors, kinda hard to do it haha, fuck being colorblind. And ill work on the rest of that. thanks
i use a t2i by the way to the guy above.

That's where the videoscope comes in. It should make things easy for you because you don't have to trust your own eyes.

thanks man. itll be sick to have you at SR next year