Member of the Month

KilaTsunami
October, 2024

Online

Welcome to the Newschoolers forums! You may read the forums as a guest, however you must be a registered member to post. Register to become a member today!

Critiques Please?

profile picture
TaySwift
Posts: 3436 - Karma: 1,622
Just finished an edit that i have been working on for the last few weeks(months).

Need some critiques on how to get better, things i should have/not done. things too over done.
also upload settings..... i know everybody goes way to hard on themselves on video quality, but the video quality from the FCP to the video file to the vimeo link is just completely different. How do the colours look? Good Flow?

anyone that helps will be given KARMA! link to vimeo here https://secure.vimeo.com/38301005

Mar 11 2012 6:53PM
0 0
profile picture
TaySwift
Posts: 3436 - Karma: 1,622
also i had my glidecam for around 1/2 of the shots, how were the noticable ones?
Mar 11 2012 8:05PM
0 0
profile picture
hardig1234
Posts: 291 - Karma: 206
sick edit nice flow.. but i just dont get the end good work though
Mar 11 2012 8:53PM
0 0
profile picture
ilanna.
Posts: 325 - Karma: 1,892
i was waiting for this song to be used in an edit, i love skiing to it. nice work on the edit!
Mar 11 2012 9:30PM
0 0
profile picture
FatWhore
Posts: 2213 - Karma: 1,098
This isn't a very big deal, but the like 1 cm bars on top and bottom got kinda annoying. Other than that sick edit man! Keep it up!
Mar 11 2012 9:40PM
0 0
profile picture
TaySwift
Posts: 3436 - Karma: 1,622
that is alexs favourite song......
Mar 11 2012 9:46PM
0 0
profile picture
TaySwift
Posts: 3436 - Karma: 1,622
that's just the embed problem from the ns video to the forum, it's not there on the actual video https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/438943.0/Love-On-Top?c=11&o=3&t=2
Mar 11 2012 9:48PM
0 0
profile picture
FatWhore
Posts: 2213 - Karma: 1,098
alright, then no complaints here man! Nice Job! Also what lens were you using?
Mar 11 2012 9:58PM
0 0
profile picture
TaySwift
Posts: 3436 - Karma: 1,622
11-16 tokina and 18-200 Canon kit lens
Mar 11 2012 10:01PM
0 0
profile picture
FatWhore
Posts: 2213 - Karma: 1,098
Super sick
Mar 11 2012 10:03PM
0 0
profile picture
Moosen
Posts: 4285 - Karma: 2,585
Good colors, nice shots, dope flow. Just get a little more "showcasing" shots of the tricks, and cut it to just bangers. It was all good but just kinda got sidetracked a bit and didn't keep my attention
Mar 11 2012 10:11PM
0 0
profile picture
TaySwift
Posts: 3436 - Karma: 1,622
i kinda got lost making this, i ran out of ideas and just fucked around on things..... for good or for worse, i learnt things from this
Mar 11 2012 10:14PM
0 0
profile picture
[J_Gasper]
Posts: 2983 - Karma: 1,594
I thought the edit was good.

Some things I would work out would be try to keep your tripod shots a little more steady. The glidecam ones werent to bad, but some of the tripod ones were bad. Maybe because you were shooting long on an unstable tripod? I have no idea.


Colors werent bad. Im not really the person to critique on CC though..


Mar 11 2012 10:16PM
0 0
profile picture
TaySwift
Posts: 3436 - Karma: 1,622
tripod shots weren't performed well, i was mad about that, i guess i didn't have the panning knob released well enough so it kinda got sticky....
Mar 11 2012 10:20PM
0 0
All times are Eastern (-5)