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Another boreal edit.....

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alden.
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from early december,
just found these shots on the desktop and squeezed a minute out of it,
enjoy

Cray from alden spence on Vimeo.


Mar 11 2012 5:49AM
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MLeone
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I thought i was a decent edit, but you really really need to watch your whites, the snow was like yellow and orange. Also the whole edit was pretty overexposed but the skier was under exposed, you really need to watch your exposure. Also a lot of the shots were way too wide imo, try to get tighter closer to the action shots, they're more appealing. I thought you got really nice shots, you just need to brush up and fine tune.
Mar 11 2012 8:41AM
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jordy19
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A edit. I liked the color correction. And the song fit the style just right
Mar 11 2012 11:19AM
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hardig1234
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i thought the shoot at 0:45 was great
Mar 11 2012 1:51PM
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alden.
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alright cool, i'll try and work on that, anything online like tutorials to help that you'd recommend?
as for wider shots I was doing the skiing half of it but still something to work on,
thanks for the feedback!


Mar 11 2012 2:52PM
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eheath
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Your blacks are extremely crushed, if there is any kind of dark background the skier disappears. Id suggest trying to fix that.
Mar 11 2012 3:06PM
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MLeone
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no problem dude, and i second evans comment, you crushed your blacks you should fix that
Mar 11 2012 4:14PM
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Moment
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noice!
Mar 13 2012 1:39AM
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