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CrotchKiller
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Edit of two of the spots i have filmed my friends at so far this year. I know some people dont like all the slow-mo but i thought it worked well with the song and i really wanted to use the Floyd song.

This is one of my favorite edits i have made because i feel like everything came together(except for the lighting at the second rail)

Warning: Snowboarding edit, not a lot of skiers hit urban at my college.



Thanks, Jake Marshall
Mar 3 2012 12:46PM
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CrotchKiller
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anyone?
Mar 3 2012 4:48PM
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CrotchKiller
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Mar 3 2012 11:19PM
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eheath
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Seemed to slow, i ended up skipping around. Using some full speed shots wouldve been nice. Some of the pans seemed a little behind where they shouldve been and the openning glide cam shots (im guess the movement was from a glide cam) were a little sloppy.
Mar 3 2012 11:23PM
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rareison
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filming was really good, but IMO it would be better if there was only some slow-mo. Also, at the first rail, there were like 5 shots of the same trick. They might have been different people, but they were the same thing. But other than those two things the edit was great.
Mar 3 2012 11:35PM
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CrotchKiller
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thank you. the first few shots were with a glide-cam. which ones struck you as sloppiest?
Mar 3 2012 11:35PM
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CrotchKiller
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do you mean wasn't only slow-mo? Everything was in slow-mo. And ya i hear ya on the repetitive tricks, just trying to put out a good edit AND include all my friends haha. Thank you for the critique!
Mar 3 2012 11:38PM
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rareison
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sorry that came out wrong. There was too much slow-mo. IMO it would be much better if only half of the clips were in slow-mo.
Mar 3 2012 11:41PM
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CrotchKiller
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ya i gotcha. I generally dont like all slow-mo edits but i felt it worked with the song. Next edit will be a nice mix for sure.
Mar 3 2012 11:43PM
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eheath
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just some of the opening shots couldve been smoother, some smoothcam couldve helped
Mar 3 2012 11:43PM
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CrotchKiller
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Cool beans, thanks for the critique
Mar 3 2012 11:46PM
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