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New Edit! Critique Wanted+K

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cwillygood
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Hey guys, I filmed alot on vacation and spent a good amount of time putting this together.

I tried to get some more tripod shots which i think came out pretty good. Let me know what i could work on and what you think of it?

Thanks guys!! +K



Feb 26 2012 2:51PM
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cwillygood
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bump? anyone
Feb 26 2012 5:41PM
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Dub_Digital
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really liked it actually, watch ur white balance on some of your shots, and maybe condense your footage to only your best shots, other than that pretty dope...u should go checkout my war of rails edit (few threads down) lol
Feb 26 2012 5:45PM
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cwillygood
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thanks man! yeah i wanted to get all my friends in, even the snowboarders haha, thanks for the tips! and i shall check it out +K
Feb 26 2012 6:12PM
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Dub_Digital
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word! and thanks for the critique ,man!
Feb 26 2012 6:37PM
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cwillygood
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bump
Feb 27 2012 7:20PM
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Merrill
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It seemed to drag out a little bit and got kinda boring.
Feb 27 2012 9:54PM
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cwillygood
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How? Besides the snowboarding? Thanks for the responce but it didnt offer much insight
Feb 28 2012 2:43PM
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Merrill
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Four minutes is really long for a park only edit that Is only shot on they same couple of features. Also a lot of the time edits have an overload of shots that are non skiing but with this edit especially for its length i think that having a few shots that aren't actuall skiing clips would really help keep my attention. For example, getting on the lift or fixing their goggles, etc. 
Feb 28 2012 5:24PM
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EastCoast.
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Agree a little long but really liked some of the shots and the color looked great! Really liked how some of the angles came out too! keep up the work bro!
Feb 28 2012 5:28PM
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cwillygood
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thanks guys, its too long i agree, but its all not on the same feature's there a bunch of different ones, there def a couple of the same ones but its not that big of a deal but thanks again for the feedback
Feb 28 2012 6:03PM
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BITS
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That was super sick! Vibe was awesome!
Feb 29 2012 8:00AM
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why
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Really sick! White balance got a little bright but besides that it was awesome. Also I really digged Sam's style.
Feb 29 2012 12:13PM
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cwillygood
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Yo thanks guys...looks like ill have to work on that!
Feb 29 2012 2:32PM
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GypsyLovin
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Im going to be that guy and comment on how long it got! (Not in a bad way) But Im sure thats not what you want to hear bro! I thought it was a super sick edit for sure! But i feel like with a lot of the skiing there was a lot of super sick tricks and some not sick ones (which happens with every edit) but when they get too long its okay too cut some of the other stuff out! Aside from that the editing and the shots were hella tight! I was super impressed with the multi-cams. More specifically on that d-f-d. Loved it man keep up the good work!! (Sorry if that wasnt much help)
Feb 29 2012 8:27PM
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miroz
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threads for later.
Feb 29 2012 8:39PM
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cwillygood
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thanks man! i do think i went a littler overboard with the shots, instead of putting in some senic or more "lifestyle" shots i put all the tricks in even though some of them wernt to good, but on some i did have to get all my friends in their, thanks though ill def think about that for my next one
Feb 29 2012 9:52PM
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