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WI414Media
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https://www.newschoolers.com/photo/430202.0/Sam-Rivedal-Sequence-?c=5&o=8&t=1
Feb 25 2012 5:26PM
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WI414Media
Posts: 85 - Karma: 29
sorry ---> https://www.newschoolers.com/photo/430202.0/Sam-Rivedal-Sequence-?c=5&o=8&t=1
Feb 25 2012 5:26PM
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gravel
Posts: 5520 - Karma: 42,295
1. learn how to embed
2. you have to make sure to include the dude's shadow in the sequence, in yours it looks like he's floating and completely shadowless
3. the photo was pretty bland, you need to work with the composition and some post work with saturation, contrast, etc...
4. get the "414 media" out of there, it's distracting and stupid
5. it's kind of a stupid trick, nobody really cares about someone doing a simple trick on a short rail

the editing was decent, other than the shadow issue, the cutting was pretty well done. don't take it as hate, just tips to improve.
Feb 26 2012 12:58AM
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KillaSteeze
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meh
Feb 26 2012 1:54AM
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