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Tbrazier
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Open to any criticism. I took the shot, my friend Charlie Naus is the skier. Thanks!
Feb 24 2012 9:52AM
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akarlsen
Posts: 523 - Karma: 144
i dont like the colors. other than that, well done with the composition. i really like how the skier doesnt hide the houses in the backround.
Feb 24 2012 9:59AM
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gravel
Posts: 5518 - Karma: 42,194
like already mentioned, not a fan of the colors. just make it a little less blue/green. it's not a bad shot, you had a decent exposure and shutter (it's a little blown out in the top corner, but the skier and the snow is well exposed)... other than that, it's not so exciting because it's on a small, seemingly backyard jump, and he's obviously only straight airing with the grab, not actually spinning or flipping. and i think that it would also be much improved if you had taken the shot from the other side, so you can see the front of the skier and his face... that's all, it's meh, the picture is good, but the content and the colors are only "meh".
Feb 24 2012 11:34AM
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the.cheat
Posts: 2859 - Karma: 171
composition is nice, colors make it look instagramy.
Feb 24 2012 12:37PM
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Balto
Posts: 25985 - Karma: 4,404
if you want colors like that, shoot lomo, don't edit stuff like that for the love of god
Feb 24 2012 1:34PM
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