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Critique dis shit yo

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Beez
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So we tried to keep this edit a bit more serious than we usually do. So tell us what you think





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Feb 22 2012 7:36PM
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B1kessk1s
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the thing is that edit is more a edit for you and your friends. the fisheye thing was really annoying imo
Feb 22 2012 7:42PM
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Beez
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in what way is this edit just for our friends more than any other edit
Feb 22 2012 7:48PM
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B1kessk1s
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it is ok to fool around and film and everything but you want us to critique your edit......really or do you just want us to watch it........... imo when you ask for a critique it is because you put a lot of effort in the editing, camera angles etc........... and the fact you write ''this shit yo'' just sounds like a 10 years old boy who just want people to see his edit........ dont get me wrong it is my opinion. at least you could have fix the framing before rendering...just saying
Feb 22 2012 8:32PM
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Merlin.
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Your vig is all over the place. Pretty annoying imo.

Feb 22 2012 8:33PM
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KRASHED
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edit that framing out!
Feb 22 2012 11:30PM
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Moosen
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Sigh....
Feb 23 2012 1:24AM
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screamin_seamen
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I would take out all of the follow cam shots. After that it will look great!
Feb 23 2012 10:35AM
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miroz
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Agreed.

I like what you were trying to do with the intro. But this isn't a serious edit. I'll be quite honest, the transition from the slow song to the rap completely lost me and I stopped watching when I saw Aunt Jemima. It's fun to throw stuff like that into a fun edit that shows the day, but if you want a serious, critique-able edit, you gotta try harder than this to cut this shit and put together something truly cohesive.

I know that sounds pretty harsh, but take from it what you will and learn. I'm sure that if you're serious about making a serious edit, you can do it - everything is there - but I'll be honest, this isn't it.
Feb 23 2012 11:03AM
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Beez
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Ok sorry guys this was a joke edit. when i said it was serious i was being sarcastic. I am sorry for posting it asking for a critique we dont actually thinks its a well made edit. Just like our last one we like to have fun, maybe we will actually make a serious one soon....but probably not =)

here was our last edit also obviously a joke thug edit....




Feb 23 2012 9:28PM
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Beez
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honestly i just sad why are you stupid. or was this just such a good troll that even after I give it away it keeps trollin ya
Feb 24 2012 5:45PM
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Beez
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nah dude the edit wasent really trolling but the serious comment was. I like edits like this i think they are entertaining maybe thats just me i dont know, and thanks we like too have a good time
Feb 24 2012 9:12PM
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