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M.Elihu February Edit

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M-Elihu
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M.Elihu February Edit from Miles Friedman on Vimeo.



Critiques are greatly appreciated.

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Feb 12 2012 11:11PM
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POW-WOW
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I liked it. It was short but you got a lot of shots in. Cant wait to see what you guys come out with.
Feb 12 2012 11:12PM
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The-Rodent
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yeee homie
Feb 12 2012 11:15PM
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The-Rodent
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check it
Feb 13 2012 12:31AM
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The-Rodent
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critques anyone?
Feb 13 2012 7:28PM
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Dub_Digital
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maybe the shot of the garage going down was a little long, but then again it was a slow tempo, i liked it overall
Feb 13 2012 7:39PM
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The-Rodent
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thanks
Feb 14 2012 7:17PM
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MLeone
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I thought that the shots you got were pretty good but the ratio of your non skiing shots to skiing shots wasn't very good imo.
Feb 14 2012 8:03PM
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Merrill
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Two things really stood out to me. The first one was when you were panning and then you suddenly switched to the still shot of the keypad and then went back to panning. The second was that in a lot of the skiing shots the whites were blown out so it made it uncomfortable to watch. Other than those two things i quite enjoyed it.
Feb 14 2012 8:37PM
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jason...
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dont include shots where its obvious that the guy fell (50 seconds), a quick cut doesnt make him land the trick
Feb 14 2012 8:37PM
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The-Rodent
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actually did land it haha
Feb 14 2012 8:40PM
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jason...
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riding away on your ass isnt a land. regardless my comment stands, weak landings should be left out
Feb 14 2012 8:45PM
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The-Rodent
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well at least your not being a dick
Feb 14 2012 9:38PM
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Willard
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Take this kids comments....He knows whats up
Feb 15 2012 11:12AM
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McFellon
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This. If that's the look you're going, try to keep it more consistent, especially with such a short edit. It's not really a big deal, I only noticed because I was looking for issues because you said to critique. It's still a great edit, I really enjoyed it.
Feb 15 2012 2:51PM
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The-Rodent
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thanks plus k
Feb 15 2012 4:54PM
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