first off you don't need vimeo plus for hd video, you just can't embed hd but most peeps will go to the site to watch it in hd if they feel like its necessary.
that being said i will give you my very honest opinion. .. first thing i noticed was that it looked like the camera was on auto exposure because the snow was very blown out and then not. it would go back and forth. as far as color correcting, to me looked like it came straight off the camera with very minimal attempts at it.
the slow mo was bad. idk if you have the option to shoot at 60fps but if you do, and want to do slow motion later, thats what you should use. but i think those clips were slowed way too much, making them way too choppy. some choppiness is ok in some cases but that was too choppy for this case.
and lastly, to me it seemed like you were going for somethin gangsta feelin but it was not at all filmed like a gangsta IMO. the music did not match because of that. if you want to keep it gangsta feelin then that type of slow mo is ok maybe just not as slow. to me, i feel like you shoulda had lots more follow cam type shots up close while still keeping the whole skier in the frame. but i noticed it was a little shaky and maybe thats why you didn't. so work on stabilizing a little more. basically it wasn't really workin for me. but that is my own honest opinion so take it as you please.
the riding wasn't terrible so just keep at it and try all sorts of different angles and styles til you find one that works for you and you can make some sweet edits
sick color correction bra? eh? 
