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Please critique my non skiing edit

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Merrill
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We had a day where we didn't have anything to do in my video class so we went to a Thai gym and i put a little edit together. It's been a while since I have asked for a critique and i quite like this video so I would really appreciate one.

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Feb 2 2012 8:12PM
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S.C
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I couldn't pay attention to the edit with that pony tail...

haha just kidding. Good work, I can tell that you worked hard at that edit.

IMO the song choice was poor and some of the shots were too tight. other than that it was a pretty good edit!

Keep at it!
Feb 2 2012 8:17PM
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Merrill
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Thanks for the critique. I Really like your summer shredding edit by the way.

Feb 3 2012 4:38PM
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S.C
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thanks!
Feb 3 2012 5:00PM
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juicedrummer11
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not too shabby. the colors seemed kinda drab to me. maybe bump the saturation just a very tiny bit and add some more contrast between the colors. and like what was said earlier too. some shots were just a little too tight imo but other than that not too bad
Feb 4 2012 5:33AM
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Merrill
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Thanks I was going for kind of a grungy look and after watching it a few days later I think that I got a little carried away
Feb 4 2012 8:17PM
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juicedrummer11
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this always happens. i have one edit in particular that is almost painful for me to watch because i did such a shitty job of color correcting/grading it. but at the time it was the look i was going for. probably just cuz you have seen it 10x more than anyone else
Feb 4 2012 8:34PM
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