I would appreciate a Critique

.Max.

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Hello filmmakers of NS,

I just "finished" my first real park edit I've ever shot. I was hoping you all could spare some time and give me a quick critique.

Equipment used:

Canon 60d
18-135 3.5-5.6 is
Ravelli AVTP tripod (Want to get a glidecam soon)
Rode Videomic

Jan 27 2012 10:09PM

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Mules

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I don't really know much about film and shit but I thought it was good

Feb 9 2012 3:23PM

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MLeone

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I thought that was actually pretty good, nice job. I would say you had some stabilization issues in some shots though and also the snow in some of the shots was overexposed. I'd try to pic up a new lens before you pick up a glidecam though

Feb 9 2012 3:40PM

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BenWhit

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i thought it was sick. skiing was rock solid and you mixed angles well

Feb 9 2012 4:06PM

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juicedrummer11

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i really enjoyed it. i thought the colors were done very well and the few minor stabilization issues were all i could think of for "critiquing." but overall very nice liked how the song fit too

Feb 9 2012 7:17PM

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Belzebub

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The skiing was great and the edit looked very good. I prefer edits where the skiier is closer to the camera i guess its personal preference though. The song was a bit boring but it gave the edit a good, chill vibe to it. Some of the shots were super cool, like where one skiier rails and then you switch 100 degrees and films anoter skis- shots like that gives good variation to the edit.

Feb 10 2012 5:11PM

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