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Critique my self edit

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DG.3
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Soo made a self edit, accidentally fucked up the exporting so its not hd like it should be. looking for a critique on everything, mostly the editing. im not too concerned about absolutly perfect colours, but if any shot jumps out at you as really needing some colour correction, by all means mention it. i am planning on adding an intro and outro and maybe adjusting the timing a bit for the final copy.

THANKS NS!!! +K
Jan 26 2012 8:30PM
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ClassyGroup
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Looks like you went pretty hard in da paint last season so you have a lot of banger shots which means you have a lot to work with. That being said you could really use some establishing shots and intro's. Also clean up the flow. Everything is all over the place; Helmet cam pow day - jump cut to - urban rail is one such example. Good skiing for sure though. Just my 2c.
Jan 27 2012 1:24AM
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DG.3
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Bump
Jan 29 2012 1:40AM
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DG.3
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pwease?
Jan 31 2012 4:14PM
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.frenchy
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Damn yo, that was sick. Killing it in the pow and in the park! Liked it on vimeo, so many bangerz in there!
Jan 31 2012 5:27PM
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DG.3
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thanks brotha!

And let me rephrase what i said in my OP, I am not too worried about picture perfect colours, buuttt I would like to try to make the shots a little more uniform in terms of the colour, so the cuts can feel a little less jarring, it flows better, and giving it that polished feel. can anyone give me some tips for acheiving that?
Jan 31 2012 6:21PM
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DG.3
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hi there
Feb 8 2012 1:21AM
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