Replying to Critique my edit

So this is my first time really filming as I got a camera (as you guessed gopro!) for christmas and got to use it for the first time yesterday. Now I edited this morning with iMovie because I couldn't find Premiere Pro online for free and don't really know the ins and outs of final cut pro. Other than the far away filming what can I improve on?

Grey Days from Sam Belden on Vimeo.