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My Friend's Music Video

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ThaLorax
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I grew up with these kids so I'm gunna shamelessly promote their first music video. I've known the Asian guy since we were like 4.




They work their asses off so please don't hate but constructive criticism is always welcome.
Jan 17 2012 11:52PM
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MatRich
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I would say to chose a situation that is more realistic acording to their age. The asian guy probably doesnt work at a place like that right now, it just looks like a kid trying to wear his dads suit.

like if you had a meeting with some investors and you decided to wear a suit that is way too big for you and does not fit you. It will look out of place and as if you are trying to emulate a character, you will lose all credibility. Its the same type of thing to me with people playing characters out of their age spectrum.

lower on the vignets a bit and the flares. A good videoclip stands out without having to add those things.

last thing is the bearded guy was often slightly out of focus.

other than that, the vibe and all was good and I liked the general feel of it. the office shots were very nice, loved the window shot.
Jan 18 2012 11:49AM
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screamin_seamen
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That scummy stache should go. hahaha
over all it was pretty dope!
Jan 18 2012 3:43PM
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extraredboutit1
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XjgBIEiRb7E&feature=sharehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XjgBIEiRb7E&feature=share
Jan 19 2012 4:32PM
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