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New Edit, Zoo Crew Slayin Lost Trail, MT!

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JAHrig
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Have a look! Went for a different vibe then usual but I like how it turned out. Enjoy! and if anything sticks out at you that needs improvement constructive criticism appreciated!



Jan 13 2012 12:13PM
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Jaymon
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I loved it man, in all honesty I think the level of riding is holding the edit back more than the editing itself haha.

Really dig the song, love the film effect you had goin on the titles in the beginning. Only thing that bugged me at all was the vignette was distracting, liked the thought but could have been better executed.

just ma .02
Jan 13 2012 12:22PM
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JAHrig
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Yeah , First time i have experimented with that vignette. Kinda wanted to give it a rustic kinda feel with the song, thanks for the opinion I shall keep that in mind!
Jan 13 2012 12:31PM
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JAHrig
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Boink....
Jan 13 2012 5:23PM
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eheath
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There were a couple of static shots, from the side of the down rail, that were directly into the sunlight, you should try to avoid that. Those shots are very blown out and look weird, if you expose down to the sunlight then you'd get a more silhouette look, but right now its just super hot.
Jan 13 2012 5:27PM
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JAHrig
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Yeah I see what ya mean, I guess I was just torn because I really liked the angle. I will keep that in mind next time for sure! Thanks!
Jan 13 2012 8:33PM
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Tanner-D
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Good edit. I think my main critique is I don't really enjoy the fade to black transitions
Jan 13 2012 8:49PM
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JAHrig
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Thanks! I only use them for transitions in between riders in this, Just felt that cutting without it was way to quick and abrupt to introduce a new rider. I def hate when people use them a ton though.
Jan 14 2012 11:23PM
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Tanner-D
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hmmm maybe shots of the riders not riding just filler shots would help smooth out the transition if you didnt want to use the fade
Jan 14 2012 11:47PM
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JAHrig
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yeah I kinda screwed up and didnt shoot enough filler at this shoot. Thought I did at the time, but after I did the intro to this one I realized I didnt have nearly enough. Lesson learned though I def wish I could have added some in the transitions
Jan 16 2012 8:20PM
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