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NJurkiewicz
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Hey so I just made this ski video as a teaser for our season. FIrst real ski video I have mad and would love all critique harsh or nice. +K will be given!

Jan 9 2012 7:39PM
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itsgarrett
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Cool video, keep it up
Jan 9 2012 11:10PM
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NJurkiewicz
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thanks man looking for some more criticism though!
Jan 9 2012 11:17PM
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NJurkiewicz
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would really appreciate some critique on the first ski video so help me out!
Jan 10 2012 8:20PM
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eheath
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Whats with the extreme letter boxing?


Also, alot of the static angles were pretty boring to watch, move your camera around when you're posted up.

The fisheye shots weren't that appealing to me, i hate the hard vignette on the side.

Blacks seemed really crushed along with some bad over exposure in some shots too, try to avoid that,
Jan 10 2012 8:35PM
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NJurkiewicz
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I have no clue about the letter boxing haha I am trying to figure out how to get rid of it, it is really bothering me haha. I have exported my video like 4 different times with different settings and just cannot fin out how to get rid of it.

Ok what would you recommend for more interesting shots???

And yah this was my wide angle and I use a step down ring for it to fit my camera and I made a noob mistake and didn't zoom in over the vignetting.

And I know I was pretty disappointed with that myself I am shooting with the a new camera this year and I was messing with settings that day and got these colors that had crushed blacks and overexposed shots.

thanks so much for the critique already have you at 10/10!

Jan 10 2012 8:42PM
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j.benziger
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the editing was ok didnt like some of the color correction but you will get better.

BIGGEST THING:

BETTER SHOTS!!!!
Jan 10 2012 11:20PM
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introvert
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I would recommend a stabilizer of some sort of follow shots.
Jan 11 2012 8:25AM
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Belzebub
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The blacks were pretty crushed, most of the shots were too wide-go closer,BUT the edit was really good. The music gave it a good vibe; it suited the style of the skiers

Jan 11 2012 9:55AM
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