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Please Critique This Video +K

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.spaghetticat.
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thanks so much

this is the last video i will ask for critique


thanks

james
Jan 7 2012 1:12PM
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JibbaTheHutt
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i wasn't a fan of the framing of the video, not sure if that was meant to be like that or not...

some of the shots had snow on the lens which is kinda distracting form the shots themselves

and i wasnt a fan of the font you used at the start and end( and weird use of film burn)

but overall it was ok good vibe and stuff!
Jan 7 2012 2:47PM
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juicedrummer11
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the font was by far the worst part of the video in my opinion. that being said...

im not sure if you meant for the aspect ratio to be widescreen format or not but i wasn't really feeling that for this edit. and then the film burn at the end wasn't really necessary i thought.

the vibe was pretty good tho and some neat shots. just those fews things that i noticed.
Jan 7 2012 11:48PM
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JAHrig
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THe static transitions, push transitions, and film burn at the end really took away from it for me. Also I didnt really like the anamorphic widescreen. I think you need a bit more filler in there other then just the riding
Jan 8 2012 12:00AM
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FatWhore
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Nice job and bump!
Jan 9 2012 5:51PM
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zurk
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liked the music, wasn't a big fan of the frame you had going on there tho

don't be afraid to use different effects and transitions, (maybe simpler harder to notice ones)
the static could have worked if you had a clear theme: ex. have your clips playing on a TV and some one changing the channels. -just an idea

sometimes less is more keep it smart and simple and you could turn out with a sick edit
keep up the good work!

Jan 10 2012 1:10AM
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.spaghetticat.
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thanks
Jan 18 2012 10:09PM
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