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Yet another edit critique!

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Just curious what you guys think.
any advice will help

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Jan 1 2012 8:13PM
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chris.goodhue
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cool edit, just make sure your keeping that camera steady, with a tripod or something and its kind of a rule of thumb not to use edits that were in skis movies, i know sail was in attack of la nina
Jan 1 2012 8:36PM
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skithedirt
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Pros
Your riders rail game was good, liked the variety of boxes along with the tricks as well
the poncho idea was funny

cons
Tripod
some shots I saw the head of the skier and then within that shot his head got cutoff
the artsy shots were decent, but I thought there was too many of them and they needed to be shorter/steadier
In the beginning you showed all of the companies, are you guys sponsored by them? or what? (may be a dumb question)

anyway, hope that helped brotha
Jan 1 2012 8:55PM
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Gknow
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i feel like sail is more of a big mountain edit song rather than a park edit. Despite the fact MSP and TGR used it.
Edit was alright, need a little more shot variety and cleaner editing.
Jan 2 2012 7:54PM
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