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Critique my first ski edit

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Anti_Steeze
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So Ive had my camera since July but never really started messing around with the video aspect of it until about a month ago. Heres my first real "edit" ive made with it. Let me know what you think!

I only color corrected the last two shots because the sun was starting to set on the other side of the hill so everything was pretty dark. That being said I think I did a better job correcting the first shot compared to the second.


Dec 29 2011 4:40PM
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*coop*
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well, im not one to criticize but overall, nice job. the editing could use a little work, more transitions. skiing was on point though nice
Dec 29 2011 6:04PM
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Anti_Steeze
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ill look into that for sure, thanks!
Dec 29 2011 7:31PM
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[J_Gasper]
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it was a good first edit. may i ask what camera and lens you were using? looks like a t2i.

some of the shots for sure could be cut down a little bit, the viewer doesn't really need to see him stop after the feature. the colors weren't to bad, but I would for sure have done some color correction. Now, this is a personal opinion, but I dont think the riders name's needed to be there. Especially on this short of an edit. Last but not least, get a few fillers in there. Be creative.



Dec 29 2011 7:40PM
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spliff.Life
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nice job


theres a few minor things, too many to name off, just like the little things that make a difference that can only be gained by experience, and imo a 2 minute ski edit cant be critiqued to deeply, its either watchable or just sucks, and this sir seemed very watchable
Dec 29 2011 7:54PM
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Anti_Steeze
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thanks guys, anyone else?
Dec 31 2011 1:56PM
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