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Critique my edit please.

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WBY
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Whats up guys, made this edit and always looking for some critique on editing and filming, sorry for the lack of different angles, but i wasn't always filming.
Thanks!

Dec 29 2011 2:36AM
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JackJohnSki
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While I thought the skiing was very good, I feel like a tripod would have helped and try to smooth out your panning. The <noob and Both Ways I could've done without, because most skiers who know their shit, would have noticed that.
Dec 29 2011 12:46PM
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WBY
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yeah, a lot of the filming wasn't actually me. and im not really sure why i put those in there i was just a little bored.
Anybody else?
Dec 29 2011 9:45PM
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MLeone
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well it was really underexposed, and there was no stabilization. there was also alot of noise
Dec 29 2011 10:20PM
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skithedirt
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this... the noise especially, make sure youre iso isnt up too high, that'll help, try to play with your aperature to get decent light without gaining noise as you would if you cranked your iso up to like 3200
Dec 29 2011 11:05PM
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steezyjibber
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Hey nice edit dude. Some things i noticed:

-Definitely the noise as people said. I'd say you could have muted it entirely, or just turned it down a lot.

-The song wasn't too bad, but it was just really repetitive.

-You could have cut the riding into the rails a little bit shorter.

-Some shots could have been smoother.

However, I liked your edit length and enjoyed that you could see what was going on at night. Skiing was very good.

Good work.

Dec 29 2011 11:26PM
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TaranItUp
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I loled
Dec 29 2011 11:30PM
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WBY
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Thanks a lot for all the responses! I didn't really play around with the colors or exposure levels. WATCH IN HD makes for much better colors and all around quality!
Dec 30 2011 12:45AM
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MLeone
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me too hahaha
Dec 30 2011 8:18AM
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Mag
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this, although the sound was annoying.
Dec 30 2011 11:32AM
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MLeone
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I lol'd again. I don't think you get what noise is either.. we aren't talking about sound.....
Dec 30 2011 11:44AM
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Mag
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Did you not see me say ALTHOUGH? I know you mean visual noise. After that I was meaning the SOUND
Dec 30 2011 11:46AM
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MLeone
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oh my bad, misintepreted lol.
Dec 30 2011 11:51AM
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