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Edit Critique Time

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NPF
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edit i made for some friends. Critique away! thanks
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NPF
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ill start i made the video to big.... haha here

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cwillygood
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id make sure your follow cam shots are as steady as possible, there were some cool angles though, i liked it
also some shots didnt look totally in focus, idk if thats just me or what

what does the YL stand for?
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NPF
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thanks man! this was the first time up on the mtn with my T2i so still getting used to it and stuff, haha yeah im using this homemade rig thing right now till i get my glidecam.
YL stands for young life. its like a youth group that Dave and Tessa Treadway run up in Pemberton and i made this edit for them.
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skithedirt
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overall, I thought it could have been a little shorter, some shots were sort of repetitive. The steadiness has already been pointed out. Also, I wasnt sure what was up with the random transitions, you mostly cut from shot to shot (preferred imo) but sometimes there was a random wipe up with the black bar. Just try and keep your transitions relatively the same so people like me dont focus on the transitions but rather on the edit.

other than that, i thought it was cool man, my roommate's a young life leader so its good/cool to see kids out supporting it!
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NPF
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Thanks man! ill try and keep the same transitions next time. was just trying the wipe and slide thing out. yeah i know it could and should have been shorter. i just really wanted to use the end of the song. i actually cut the song a bit too... thats sick your roommate is a YL leader!
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NPF
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bump
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NPF
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thanks! yeah it should have been shorter. maybe if i get bored ill re edit it haha.
hahah yeah that would be Dave Treadway
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Moosen
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pretty good. just make shorter and just teh banger shots. what does your homemade rig look like?/what is it made out of?
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NPF
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haha yeah he is all about the old school tricks

thanks yeah ill post pics of my rig thing when i get a chance
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