Short documentary-Ground Up, check it out

I thought it was pretty good. You picked a pretty good person to make a documentary on.

A couple of things I noticed was that the audio levels seemed to change a bit and there was a fuzz in the audio of some shots.

Also, i understand it's a documentary, but the way you ended it off with him ripping a bong and then catering to his child. It just seemed to give off a completely different vibe than the rest of the video.

I enjoyed that for sure! nice man


Some things.
Did you have access to lighting equipment? There were a lot of distracting shadows on some of the indoor interview shots. I think a hair light would have done a lot in the lighting aspect.

I also agree with the above post about the bong and then the kid. I can see how you wanted the shot as it goes well with the music, but mehh Im not sure if that was a good call having it right before the baby footage. Although, that is the reality if this guys life, so it can go both ways.

nice man

I went with a two light set up instead of a three light set up because I didn't have access to a hair light. I wish i did, but I figured the average viewer wouldn't notice too much

as for him smoking weed and caring for his child, I just wanted to show a realistic view of his lifestyle; that's just how he lives.

thanks for watching and thanks for the comments!