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Critique our first edit of the season

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Tanner-D
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Ok so this season I really wanted to make some more quality edits that had a little bit of story and depth to them; however, I'm getting surgery for my shoulder in a week so I won't be able to film anymore. My friends will have to get footage for me but regardless of that this is what I've made so far from this season. Feel free to be as brutal as necessary.

Dec 16 2011 6:01PM
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I.B
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I really liked it man.

Get better tanner!!!

We'll get you only the most preme of shots!:D
Dec 16 2011 7:09PM
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McFellon
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It was awesome!
I loved the intro. It was funny, and set the vibe for the rest of the edit, which, other than the excessive amount of snowboarding, was great too.
Good luck with your surgery, and I hope you keep making edits like this one.
Dec 16 2011 10:03PM
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I.B
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Gtfo
Dec 16 2011 10:09PM
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Tanner-D
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Thanks. Intro was kind of a new thing for me so glad to hear you liked it
Dec 17 2011 2:45AM
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cwillygood
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that was sick! really liked the song, the only thing i could say was dont put as many of the same trick in, there were a bunch of frontflips, but it really doesnt matter that much, overall really cool, whats the song btw?
Dec 17 2011 10:14AM
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Tanner-D
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Songs were
Birmingham by Odjbox
The King and all oh His Men by Wolf Gang
Dec 17 2011 11:04AM
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Tanner-D
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and I agree with the repetitiveness of tricks being a little annoying. This video was for my high school's talent show which we happened to win so shots like frontflips were big crowd pleasers.
Dec 17 2011 12:47PM
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Tanner-D
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Bump would really like a couple more critiques before I work on my next project
Dec 19 2011 12:56AM
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alexat955
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do you live in tahoe?
Dec 19 2011 2:38AM
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Tanner-D
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In Gardnerville
Dec 19 2011 11:54AM
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