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RONALD - Short film

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This is a film made by some kids at my school, posted just yesterday. If you cannot understand whats going on in the video, it about a ronald mcdonald pencil that everyone wants and is trying to get. Let me know what you think and i can give them some feedback!

Dec 15 2011 6:28PM
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gravel
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TOO MUCH VIGNETTE!!!!!
Dec 15 2011 7:22PM
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Honestly couldn't stand watching it. Acting was so bad and not even funny bad.
Dec 15 2011 7:28PM
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I thought it was pretty good for a high school movie (especially compared to my high school movies haha). I definitely agree on the vignette. My main criticism is that I don't think the idea was quite long enough to sustain a 10 minute movie. Probably would be better if you cut it down to 3-4 minutes. You could easily do that with the footage that you have and still tell the exact same story. Overall pretty fun though. I like all the random little goofy sequences you threw in.
Dec 15 2011 7:50PM
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I'll let em know! And yeah I though it was good fOr a highschool film. Not like they are professional actors..
Dec 15 2011 8:27PM
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