the vid worked for me...
I loved the Oncue song, that song is sick as hell. As for critiques in the beginning try to cut your shots a little shorter at the end, in some of them there was just blank space of the jump and I think I saw a tripod laying on the ground in one of the shots? Also, try to work on keeping your camera steady or still when you are filming still shots like the shots in the intro part and between scenes. Also, try to color correct, just a little bit of a difference between the different places you filmed, and maybe make sure your aperature is high enough when filming in flatlight?
Just a rough critique, hope it worked brotha