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Critique please +K

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EC-Skier
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Heres the vimeo link: http://vimeo.com/32874119 and the shot at :45 got screwed up when i uploaded it for some reason
so heres the NS link: https://www.newschoolers.com/membervideo/391078.0/PriME-Productions:-NoSnow-November?s=125410&t=2&o=8

thanks
Nov 30 2011 10:55AM
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chris.G
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this really good man, sick skiing too.

the only thing I would say is at 0:50 - 1:05 you have three shots of the same flat rail from the same angle. I guess I would try to avoid that and change up the angle, that'll keep it a little more interesting at that part. but you definitely have some other shots in there that I thought were really good/creative

I like how you kept the cloudy/foggy part together at the end rather than mixing it in with the sunny, that made it seem more organized

overall it was really good, keep it up!
Nov 30 2011 11:36AM
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EC-Skier
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thanks man, i totally forgot to switch up the angle that day haha
Nov 30 2011 11:39AM
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MattL.
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i enjoyed it alot man. few things i noticed, you had some stabilization problems in some shots, and also some quality problems. great job!
Nov 30 2011 2:37PM
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EC-Skier
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yea, i gotta work on glidecam shots. thanks
Nov 30 2011 3:49PM
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MattL.
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no problem, great job.
Nov 30 2011 6:09PM
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EC-Skier
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+k to both of you btw
Nov 30 2011 6:53PM
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lukewalnuts
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here you go

Nov 30 2011 7:55PM
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EC-Skier
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thanks man +k
Nov 30 2011 8:00PM
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eheath
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A lot of your shots were a little too tight, take a couple steps back.
Nov 30 2011 8:05PM
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EC-Skier
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yea, thanks. I talked to some people who said they liked tight shots, and then some don't. Ill try to find a happy medium. And youre already at 10/10
Nov 30 2011 8:07PM
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eheath
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You just cut of some heads/arms many times, only for part of the clip, but thats one of the things i try to avoid the most.
Nov 30 2011 8:15PM
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EC-Skier
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werd, thanks
Nov 30 2011 8:17PM
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