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So I made an edit...

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michelle
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Stepped far out of my comfort zone and decided to do some filming today. This is my second video ever. Went out with the intention of just filming, not sure what direction it was going to go in. This is hard stuff, I have so much respect for you guys who film after doing this.

Anyways, check it out!

skate from Michelle McWade on Vimeo.

Nov 27 2011 10:00PM
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240sxKid
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You did a good job for just going out and doing it for fun. I really liked it. Some shots were a little too long like the wheat in front of the sun. And you did a good job at mixing in different types of shots like establishing and mediums. Keep it going!
Nov 27 2011 10:13PM
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the.cheat
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i liked it! personally, the utter lack of sound made me feel a bit disconnected with the edit, so maybe have a little audio like when youve got wheels rolling its nice to subtly hear, etc. what'd you shoot it on?
Nov 27 2011 10:23PM
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240sxKid
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Yeah maybe fade in the girls voice when shes talking or they both hop on the board.
Nov 27 2011 10:28PM
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michelle
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Thanks guys! And thanks for the advice, I'll definitely keep that in mind if/when I make another edit.

And this was filmed on a 5dmkii with the 24-105
Nov 27 2011 10:32PM
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gus555
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I liked it, i though that girl almost died on the swing, but honestly i got bored watching halfway through.
Nov 27 2011 11:37PM
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