one of the things i hate most about skiing culture is the many young tryhards. not to bash you too much, but when you land, it looks like you're trying REALLY hard to afterbang, or be steezy in some other way. almost always, if you land a trick cleanly, it'll look good. so if you have a solid bag of tricks (as opposed to a larger one) you'll look better. there were a couple super obvious forced afterbangs that made me cringe.
which brings me to my next point: ONLY put tricks in that you landed cleanly. if you're any more than 45 degrees out of the intended spin when you land (eg front 270 where you land sideways) take it out. it's not impressive or stylish; it just makes you look like a worse skier. the exception to this rule is if you do something really insane, in which case people will want to see it.
this is more trick advice: when you switch up or front 270, be sideways on the rail before you start to do your trick. while it's easier to switch up at 45 degrees, learn to do it at 90.
finally, some positive: imo the editing was great. no wack effects, the camera had good definition and was stable for practically all of the shots (trust me, it's a big deal) and all of the fonts were very clean.
tl;dr
editing = top notch
skiing = dont be such a tryhard.
sorry if harsh, honest opinion.